There wasn't anything wrong. I just changed the wording to improve the flow of the sentence. Also, <<to>> when used with the infinitive isn't always necessary. I removed some of the unnecessary "to"'s. There really isn't a rule for that; it just takes practice.

Oh, and I'd be perfectly willing to help you with your English. Certo, ho bisogno dell'aiuto con il mio italiano! 

A dopo! 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Gianluca and I'm Italian.
I hope to find friends to improve my English or help them learn italian!