Corrections · 8
Practicing Spanish
Hola,
Me llamo Mike. Quiero comer una hamburguesa, pero no tengo (no sería mejor 'no he comprado') ninguna. Me gusta mucho comer hamburguesas(a menos que quieras decir que te gusta comer muchas hamburguesas). Es posible (o probable) que mañana pueda comer hamburgesas.
Practicing Spanish
Hola. Me llamo Mike. Quiero comer una hamburguesa ahora pero no lo tengo. Me gusta mucho comer hamburguesas. Es posible que mañana pueda conseguir/comer/comprar las hambugesas.
¡Ahora me antojé!
Practicing Spanish
Hola. Me llamo Mike. Quiero Quisiera comer una hamburguesa pero no lo tengo. Me gusta comer mucho hamburguesas. Me gustan mucho. Es posible que mañana puedo la hambugesas coma una.
First correction:
"Quiero" is present simple. I think it would sound better if you said "Quisiera", because that form express a wish. In english, the correct way (with "Quisiera") would be like "I would like to have a burger".
Second correction:
"Pero no la tengo" it's not necessary. Is like you're trying to say: "I want a burger, but I don't have it". You really don't say something like that in real life.
Third correction:
"Me gusta comer mucho hamburguesas", is redundant. You are already talking about burguers, so you can say something like "I like them very much" ("Me gustan mucho")
Forth correction:
"...puedo las hamburguesas" doesn't have any sense. "Puedo" is a verb (I can), you don't say "I can the burguer". I think you tried to say something like "Is possible that tomorrow eat one", and in that case the correct traduction is: "Es posible que mañana coma una".
Hope that helps.
Keep going. You're doing well.
Regards,
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