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It‘s Rainning
Lianyungang is near to the north of China, the less of not much rain as and the air is very dry. , I cann't adapted it As a southerner, I cannot stand it. Today, it rained there is ranning for a while. , It is hot and suffocating in the office 1. It is here always is windy except for today. , but the weather It is more comfortable rather than other cities in during the hot summers. , because The range in temperature is big great between mornings and nights. The even more I am pleased that is I would am not worry worried about getting a tan this summer. I am going out to soon leaving work immediatly, it's am so excited, for tommorow is weenkend.
Nice short passage. However, it would be better if you provide me a Chinese translation as well as there are some places, I am guessing to what you are trying to say and usually I guessed wrong! :( Enjoy your weekend.
1. This is sentence is grammatically correct but should not put here because you are talking about Lianyungang's weather and suddenly you talk about the office and then back to the weather. This is odd and breaks the thought of the reader. Hence not good writing.
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