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Graduation season... Congraduation for everyone of graduate.Today,I returned to Xiamen from Zhangzhou University.From last week,we holded a series of activities.It is consist of dinner party and singing in KTV and so on.We had a nice time in the last University life.But,when we must leave to school for working,almost classmate were cried and they did not to separating of us.I feel that the sense is terrible.But, I know we should let us more and more fortitude.We must belive we can together at sometime.We must do best of our job.We must mutually help of everyone.We must belive the separating is temporary and we can live more wonderful of us.

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Congraduation Congratulations to for everyone of graduate.  Today, I returned to Xiamen from Zhangzhou University.  From Last week, we holded held a series number of activities.  It is They consist of a dinner party, and singing in KTV and other functions so on.  We had a nice great time in the last University college life but on the thought of parting and braving our future careers .But,when we must leave to school for working, almost every classmate broke into tears. were cried and they did not to separating of us.I feel that the sense is terrible.But, I know we should let us more and more fortitudehough it is sad, we know the inevitable and need to be strong.  We must belive we can together at sometime Surely, we can meet up sometime in the future.  I believe that separation is temporary but a great life to look forward to.

 We must do best of our job.We must mutually help of everyone.We must belive the separating is temporary and we can live more wonderful of us.

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