My son's writing after reading a book named 'Mr. Hynde is out of his mind!'
Mr. Hynde is out of mind.
A.J. hates school. He don't like reading and writing and math. The most horob;e subject he realy hates music. Music is so dumb. He is not going to be a sing. Why do he have to lurn music? A. . is going to be a dirt bike racer. He thinks music is most boring subject in the history of the word. Last year music teacher was Mr. Loring. He likes bouts and his favorite song is who stole the cookie from the cookie jar. And Mr. Loring's other favorite song is five little monkeys jumping on the bed. If any one of monkeys jumped on A. J.'s bed A. J. will sell the bed. A. J. don't like even her sister jumped on A.J.'s bed. Forget about monkeys.
Miss Daisy said, "Line up!" Miss Daisy is craisy. "Line up for what?" the class shouted. "It's time for music class." Miss Daisy said. "Yeapie!" Andrea and Emily said. "Boo!" the class shouted. This realy anoying girl with cally brown hair. And her cry baby friend Emily. In the music class the class waitd for Mr. Loring the music teacher. sudenly the most amazing in the history of the world hapend. a purple smoke poured out of the frond door. and the lazer beams with all sort of colers. It was cool. sudenly two guys ran in to the class and danced around. One guy shouted "Are you ready for some music class>" Then one man funky grup Mr. Hynde!" The two guys ran out the door and Mr. Hynde came in and he had danced around and rap. he had this craisy move head spin. Head spin is when you had spined on your head. It was cool. And the lights were back to normal. "Are you new music teacher?" some kid said. "true that." Mr. Hynde said. In Ela Mentary school. There was a new music teacher named Mr. Hynde.
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MANY spelling errors. If you are not sure - use the dictionary.
Practice CAPITALIZATION too - this is very important.
This is my son's writing after reading a book named 'Mr. Hynde Is Out of His mind!'
A.J. hates school. He doesn't like reading, writing and math. The
Miss Daisy said, "Line up!" Miss Daisy is crazy. "Line up for what?" the class shouted. "It's time for music class." Miss Daisy said. "Yippie!" Andrea said, and Emily said. "Boo!"
-------This is the first half of his writing.....the rest will be coming soon....
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I will only continue to check your son's work if you check my notebooks. It's fair.
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