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a new day i got a very very bad temper recently.there coes the final exam and i am totally unprepared.the book is too difficult for me.actually,i don't pay much focus on it.come on !it will be better

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a new day

i got a very very bad temper recently.there coes the final exam and i am totally unprepared.the book is too difficult for me.actually,i don't pay much focus on it.come on !it will be better

 

I was in a very, very bad mood recently. The final exam is coming and I am totally unprepared. The book is too difficult for me. Actually I can't focus on it. Come on ! I can do better !

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a new day

i got a very very bad temper recently.there coes the final exam and i am totally unprepared.the book is too difficult for me.actually,i don't pay much focus on it.come on !it will be better

 

**Correction:

There "comes" the final exam...

You cannot say "I don't pay much focus". You should say "attention". Or you can say "I can't focus."

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I've had a very, very bad temper recently. Here comes the final exam (The final exam is coming), and i am totally unprepared. The book is too difficult for me. Actually, I don't focus on it. Come on! It will get better.

 

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