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In the zoo There are many animals in the zoo.Look,the elephant is walking.The bird is flying.The monkey is swinging.The tiger is running.The rabbit is jumping.The fish is swimming.The panda is climbing.The bear is drinking water.They are good friends.They are very happy.

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In the Zoo

There are many animals in the zoo.  Look!  The elephant is walking.  The bird is flying.  The monkey is swinging.  The tiger is running.  The rabbit is jumping.  The fish is swimming.  The panda is climbing.  The bear is drinking water.  They are good friends.  They are very happy.

 

 

Thanks for Jeff`s correct!

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In the Zoo Capitalize all significant words in a title.

 

There are many animals in the zoo.Look!  The elephant is walking.The bird is flying.The monkey is swinging.The tiger is running.The rabbit is jumping.The fish is swimming.The panda is climbing.The bear is drinking water.They are good friends.They are very happy.

 

Except for the mechanics of the language, you write great as a children's book author.  You need to leave two spaces after the period.

 

 

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