今日/Today.
今日私べんきょうしました９じから１５じまで。
Today I was studying from 9 to 15.
だから、１６じ私学を出ました。
Therefore, I left school at 16.
とき私いくへ私のいえ、私おちました、そして私の足はこわれた。
When I was going home, I fell, and my leg broke.
今私がびょういんです。
Now I'm in a hospital.
私のけんこうはわるいです。
My health's bad.
Okay, this was a simple note, but I'm just a beginner. I probably made some horrible mistakes up there. I used what I remember hearing in some animes. I also only used the kanji that I recognize, since I could be writing something totally off-topic when using the kanjis that appear when I press space. Feel free to correct me, and I can also teach portuguese or english to anyone willing to teach me some english. Bye!
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今日/Today.
今日私べんきょうしました９じから１５じまで。
今日、私は９じから１５じまでべんきょうしました。
Today I was studying from 9 to 15.
だから、１６じ私学を出ました。
だから、１６じに学校を出ました。
Therefore, I left school at 16.
とき私いくへ私のいえ、私おちました、そして私の足はこわれた。
いえへ帰っていたとき、私は転んで、足を折りました。
When I was going home, I fell, and my leg broke.
今私がびょういんです。
今、私は病院にいます。
Now I'm in a hospital.
私のけんこうはわるいです。
私の身体状態はわるいです。
My health's bad.
* けんこう is the state of being free from illness or injury.
* 身体状態 is a person's mental/physical condition.
* health has got these meanings.
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Well, don't pay attention to the colour I chose...Its not well-organized.
If you want to learn Japanese fast, I think that learning a polite style, teinei-tai, first is better. (On this notebook, You are writing in a Japanese polite style. Polite Japanese ends with "desu""deshita""desu ka"/"masu""masen""masu ka"/"mashita""masen deshita""masen deshita ka".)
While verbs in a direct style, futsu-tai, which appears much in manga, anime and TV show, irregularly change their endings depending on their tense or if they are in an affarmative or negative sentence, Verbs in a polite style shimply don't. Direct style might confuse you more.
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Okay, this was a simple note, but I'm just a beginner. I probably made some horrible mistakes up there. I used what I remember hearing in some animes. I also only used the kanji that I recognize, since I could be writing something totally off-topic when using the kanjis that appear when I press space. Feel free to correct me, and I can also teach portuguese or english to anyone willing to teach me some english. Bye!
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こんにちは。はじめまして。
- konnichiwa, hajimemashite.
-- Hello. Nice to meet you.
私はヘンプです。日本人です。
- watashi wa hemp' desu. Nihon jin desu.
- I am hemp'. Japanese.
I was slowly reading your text paying attention to it, and then, I got surprised at 3rd line and now I'm writing to you.
大丈夫ですか。(だいじょうぶですか）
- daijoubu desu ka.
-- Are you all right?
お大事に。（おだいじに）
- odaiji ni.
-- Take care of yourself/ Get well soon.
*it is a common expression for people who are sick or injured.
ところで、
by the way,
オタクパワーはすごいです。
otaku power is grate!
I read your comment on somebody's notebook saying that Learning Kanji is hard. It was just incredible that you read that long sentence by yourself and understood what she meant. I was so impressed that I came here. Nice to meet you.
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