First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Well.. Actually I want to work in a Film firm after graduate my uni.
To work in film field, I have to be good at speaking English.. So this is a important reason why I'm learning English.
And I think most Korean people are more dedicated to learn English than other Asia countries. So, it means English skill is being mcuh more important and essential skill in Korea these days.. 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Well.. Actually I want to work in a Film comfirm after graduating from my uni.

To work the film field, I have to be good at speaking English ... so this is so animportant reason whatwhy I'm learning English.

And I think most Korean people are more dedicated to studying English than another Asian countries, so it means English skill is being becoming a more important and essential skill in Korea these days..

notes:
    Try not to start sentences with and or but. Use these for joining ideas instead.

    Asia = place.

    Asian = belongs to asia.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Well.. Actually I want to work in Film confirm after my graduation from my uni.
To work in the this field, I have to be a good speaking in English.. So this is the most  important reason to learning English.
And I think most Korean people are more dedicated to studying English than other Asia coutries. So, it means English skill is being more important and essential skill in Korea these days..