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All I Want Now Is Chocolate Listening to a Russian song, I am wondering why my girlfriend told me that I am always like a peacock standing on the farm. I still cannot understand what actually she tried to tell me. Perhaps people like her who are good at languages always like to talk like that, I thought. However she seemed quite serious. Well, serious or not, I don't care. I don't have time for this. Three hours ago, she called me, telling me that she was unable to solve a maths question. Well, I am always bad at maths, so I tried to get help from my cousin. Later, I called back to her to tell her the solution. She repeated the same thing before putting down the phone, leaving me bewildered. I like to eat some chocolates whenever I feel confused, excited or anxious. No exception this time. From my drawer I take out a bar of dark chocolate. I eat it in small pieces. Savoring the taste. Anyway I need more of it. More! Go outside and buy? I am too lazy. Well, now I have a good idea, that is to imagine that I am swimming in a sea of chocolate. Yummy.

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All I Want Now Is Chocolate

Listening to a Russian song, I am wondering why my girlfriend told me that I am always like a peacock standing on struting in the farm. I still cannot understand exactly what actually she tried was trying to tell me. Perhaps people like her who are good at languages always like to talk like that, I thought. However, she seemed quite serious. Well, serious or not, I don't care. I don't have time for this.

Three hours ago, she called me, telling me that she was unable to solve a maths In US English, it is math question. Well, I am always bad at maths and, so I tried to get help from my cousin. Later, I called back to her to tell her the solution. She repeated the same thing remark before hanging up putting down the phone, leaving me bewildered.

I like to eat some chocolates whenever I feel am confused, excited or feeling anxious. No exception this time. From my drawer I take took out a bar of dark chocolate and nibbling in small pieces to savour it. I eat it in small pieces. Savoring the taste. Anyway I need more chocolates.  of it. More I say! Go outside and buy more? Nah, I am too lazy. Well, now I have a good better idea. , that is to imagine that I am Go swimming in a sea of chocolate! Yummieeeeeeeeeee!


The tone of your last paragraph changes.  So it is okay to lighten it even more with slang etc.

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All I Want Now Is Chocolate

Listening to a Russian song, I am wondering why my girlfriend told me that I am always like a peacock standing on the farm. I still cannot do not understand what actually she tried to tell me. Perhaps people like her who are good at languages always like to talk like that/show off, I thought. However she seemed quite serious. Well, serious or not, I don't care. I just don't have time for this.

Three hours ago, she called me, telling me that she was unable to solve a maths question. Well, I am have always been bad at maths, so I tried to get help from my cousin. Later, I called back to her her back to tell her the solution. She repeated the same thing before putting down the phone, leaving me bewildered.

I like to eat some chocolates whenever I feel confused, excited or anxious. No exception this time. From my drawer I take out a bar of dark chocolate. I eat it in small pieces. Savoring the taste. Anyway I need more of it. More! Go outside and buy? I am too lazy. Well, now I have a good idea, that is to imagine that I am swimming in a sea of chocolate. Yummy.

 

 

 

HAHAHA... take it easy with the chocolates. :)

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Hey! YangYang. This is just fiction. :P
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suspicious*
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Haha i think u r lucky to have such a girlfriend like that, who good at word and alway keeps things vague, cuz sometime vagueness is great for love, lol. And i just guess that "peacock standing in the farm" means "世中豪杰” haha, maybe, but i'm kinda supspicious with that "peacock", anyway. Just not a usual way to me. Is it in Malaysia?

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