Today I fell felt happily happy. I hadn't met seen my father for in a long time. I know I am happy when my parents meet together are reunited. My father is looks older than before. No tears, but I believe that he is very sad when he must leave our family. I hope I have can make a lot of money that i can to give to my parents. I love them so much.

Use capital (big) letters at the beginning of a sentence. Also, capitalize the word "I" when you are referring to yourself.

"I feel (something) happily" is to touch something with joy. "I feel happy" expresses your joyful mood.

Your parents are lucky to have a daughter who cares for them a lot.

My Day

Today, I felt happy. I had not seen my father for a long time. I know that I am happy whenever my parents can see each other. My father looked noticeably older than before. While he shed no tears,  I think that he was extremely sad when he had to leave us. I wish that I had a lot of money that I could give to my parents. I love them both so much.

A nice essay! Thanks for sharing and posting! More so than money, just letting both of them know that you love them, would bring your parents much happiness! Tôi muốn là bạn bè của bạn và giúp bạn học tiếng Anh.Xin vui lòng viết thư cho tôi nếu bạn có bất kỳ câu hỏi nào.Với Trân, Jonathan