Search from various English teachers...
China flagkatee
A good trip: a person or place? right? I travelled to Bali with one of my friends six days ago. It's really an amazing experience for me and I have tried a lot of new things for the first time. But I guess whether you could choose a suitable person to a great destination is very essential after experience this trip. For instance, you don't like shopping, while your girl friend you will go with do. It will become a disaster.she might go crazy about shopping while you just only follow her. Even if both of you should have been very tried a few minutes, she might suddenly become excited and inexhausted in the shopping mall. However,you only want to sit down to have a break at that time. Another example, you'd better choose the person who is considerate and has a mild temper and good at getting along with others. During the trip, you both need to stay with each other from day to night. You really often don't want youself to involve in a lot of fights. Of course, If she is, you don't have to care about her mood all the time like looking after a child. The suitable place is also important. Bali is a tropical country, so there are too many trees and insects. I guess so many Chinese girls don't like to get close to some insects. When you're having your breakfast, you're see a few ants climbing on your table.It might not bring you a good feeling. Having an exotic trip is an awesome things. You could forget everything and just put yourselg into local life and culture. It will broaden your eyesight and make yourself relax. If you could choose a right person or place, your experience might become better.

Corrections · 5

0
Thank you all for your comments, Ned, Language fan and Ming Luis. I'm glad to have your friends.
0
Welcome home! Glad you had a good time.
0
oh you have a wonderful English. I think your text needs no correction except in some small parts. ;)
0
跟對人真的很重要!不然整個旅程都玩得不盡興!
0
Thank you for your composition !

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today