preparing for postgraduate entrance exams I like the weather in Hangzhou now, it's sunny and a little wind. last month, my father called me and asked whether had I make any decision about my future.

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preparing for postgraduate entrance exams I like the weather in Hangzhou now, it's sunny and a little wind. last month, my father called me and asked whether had I make any decision about my future. Of course, I doubt at first, But I want to postgraduate entrance exams. There are so many competitions about my major-computer science. I guess get a higher degree can get a better job. However, nothing is easy for life. My friends told me that I had to make sure about which collage you want attend, and I should get knowledge about the requirement for that major. OTOS, I have to occupy a seat from a classroom that the exams for postgraduate schools before next term. And I want to find a partner, I think if he or she has the the major as I am would be better. But no one has been found until now.

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preparing for Postgraduate Entrance Exams Preparation. Capitalize all words in a title.

I like the weather in Hangzhou now. it's It is sunny and a little windy. Last month, my father called me and asked whether if 1 I had I made any decision about my future. Of course, I doubt was not sure at first, but I want to get through with my postgraduate entrance exams first. There are so many competitions about my major- in the computer field science. I guess getting an advanced higher degree can get would land me a better job.

However, nothing is easy for in life. My friends told me that I had to make sure about which collage you want to attend, and I should get knowledge about the major requirements for that major. OTOS 2, I have to occupy a seat from a classroom that the exams for postgraduate schools before next term. And I want to find a partner, I think if he or she has the the major as I am would be better. But no one has been found until now. 3

1. See #4 of http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Common%20English%20Errors.htm

2. Never use uncommon abbreviatons. Spell out in full. Give the abbreviation then; enclosed in parenthesis. Afterwards you can use the abbeviation later in the essay.

3. I don't understand your English here. It made no sense to me and so I cannot correct it. If you translate it into Chinese, it makes no sense either. If you want correction write in Chinese and I shall be of help.

This is an oddity which I did not experience before to understand what the following paragraph means. After his comment and some search on the internet... Basically it is getting "squatters right".

Since there are not many students and places of study are few, I have to occupy find a seat from a classroom seat that the exams for so that I can study and prepare for my exams. postgraduate schools before next term. And I want to find a partner, I think if he or she has the the major as I am would be better. But no one has been found until now.

It would be great if I can find a study partner in the same major. However, I have not found anyone yet until now.

college instead of collage

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