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First notebook entry: Introducing myself 你们好。你们可以叫我江明凯。 这是我的第一次网上写中文。我想教英文和学中文。我学了半年了。我很喜欢足球。我是康奈尔大学的学生。 很高兴认识你!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你们好。你们可以叫我江明凯。 这是我的第一次在网上写中文。我想教英文和学中文。我学了半年了。我很喜欢足球。我是康奈尔大学的学生。

很高兴认识你!

 

      写得真不错,继续努力!!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

 

你们好。你们可以叫我江明凯吧1。 这是我的第一次网上网写中文。我想教英文和也想学中文。我已經学了半年了。我很喜欢足球。我是個康奈尔大学的学生, 也很喜欢足球。

很高兴认识你!

 

In many instances, "I", "me", "you" are omitted when the context is clear.

 

1. Since you are writing informally, you could use the final particles to lighten up.  Unlike English during introductions, you can say, "You can call me ...." without sounding like a haughty person.  Unfortunately many Chinese translate verbatim and cause slight misunderstandings.  The introduction of 吧 is equvialent to, "My name William, just call me Bill."

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你们好。你们可以叫我江明凯。(我叫江明凯。It is better. When chinese introduce themselves , we say: 我叫+name.But your sentence is not wrong, Just feel unnature. ) 
这是我的第一次在网上写用中文写作。(用:use.  写作: writing)
我想教英文和也想学中文。
我学中文了半年了。
我很喜欢足球。
我是康奈尔大学的学生。

很高兴认识你!
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写地挺好的。
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I want to exchange language with you.Do you use qq,wechat or skype?

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