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yuyu's notebook entry: Aug 11, 2010 todays so busy as bee!but iacan go clubbing at week end~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!

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yuyu's notebook entry: Aug 11, 2010

todays so busy as bee!but iacan go clubbing at week end~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!

Today, I'm so busy - like a bee! But I get to unwind by clubbing this weekend ~~~ !

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い

as busy as a bee ... does not work well with days. 
The thoughts are disconnected. I'm busy + I can go clubbing. I added some anticipation. This will help connect the thoughts. 

 

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