Can you correct this these for me? Thanks.

1-He admitted to the police that he was the thief.

2- Sara, she has had an asthma attack!

3- The cancer patient is in stable condition.(n) .

4-We have festivals in my country.

5-She has won a gold medal from the Olympics.
6-Sucking Sucking Inhaling smoke into your lungs will kill you.
7-Every time Everytime/Each time, I go to that class, I panic.
8- i wanna I want to participate but do I did not prepare.
9-The proof of courage is in facing up to our worst fears. I prefer, "Facing our worst fear is proof of courage."

10- You got have a severe case of panic.
11- The virus- It has side effects.  This sentence is semantically wrong.  A virus has no side effect or anything. Are you trying to say, "Virus can be harmful to you"?
12-The playoffs will get underway at the King Fahd Stadium.
13-She is a tough person to work with.
14-You' re, You're like, wheezing like an old person wheezing away.
15- I was thinking, we could make a volcano out of with vinegar and baking soda. I prefer, "using vinegar and..."

16-This is bee stings? ? No space between the 's' and '?'
17-The smoking ban became is in effective.
18-Ginger tea is good for the digestion.
19- Your sister gave me sleeping pills for my insomnia.
20- They can be very itchy.
21- The water in the bathtub was lukewarm.
22-Motion sickness is a normal response. Remedy for nausea and motion sickness is ginger .
23- Oatmeal cookies with raisins are my favorite snack.
24- You can cut and paste internet images into the word processing document.
25- Sara is under a lot of pressure. I prefer, "much" than "a lot"

26- Sleep is a good remedy.
27- The runners soaked her aching feet in warm water after the race. This can happen but I guess you are trying to say, they do it themselves.  So the sentence should be,

The runners soaked their aching feet...

28- Cover yourself against sunburn.
30- Coughing is an early symptom of lung disease.
31- She have has tiny dents in her my thumb nail thumbnail and little fingernails.finger nail.

32- Video games can be quite addictive for young kids.
33- Some people drink coffee to keep stay alert at night.
34- Please behave yourselves when we visit grandma.
35- This coffee has a bitter taste.
36- I should try to boost my vocabulary.
37- I think I was brewing coffee.
38- Some smokers use hypnosis to try and kicking the habit.
39- I was about to tell her, but when at that instant, the phone range.
I prefer, "... tell her when the phone rang at that instant." 

40- The chair was put in a mild acid bath to remove the paint.
41- It's odorless.
42- Jon was worried that the cup might fall, for as it stood on was at the edge of the table.
34- Caffeine is a chemical stimulant.

Can you correct this for me.

1-He admitted to the police that he was the thief.

2- Sara had an , she has asthma attack!

3- The cancer patient is in stable condition.(n) .

4- We have a festival in my country .

5- She has gold medal from olympics. an Olympic gold medal.
6- Sucking Sucking smoke into your lungs will kill you.
7-Every time I go to that class I panic.
8- i wanna I want to participate but do I not I did not prepare. ('Wanna' is slang for 'want to')
9-The proof of courage is in facing up to our worst fears .
10- You got a severe case of panic.
11- The virus- It has side effects.
12-The playoffs get underway at King Fahd Stadium.
13-She is a tough person to work .
14-You're ' re, like, wheezing like an old person .
15- I was thinking that we could make a volcano with vinegar and baking soda.
16-This is These are bee stings?
17-The smoking ban became effective . came into effect.
18-Ginger tea is good for the digestion.
19- Your sister gave me sleeping pills for my insomnia.
20- They can be very itchy.
21- The water in the bathtub was lukewarm.
22-Motion sickness is a normal response. The remedy for nausea and motion sickness is ginger.
23- Oatmeal cookies with raisins are my favorite snack.
24- You can cut and paste internet images into the word processing document.
25- Sara is under a lot of pressure.
26- Sleep is a good remedy.
27- The runners soaked her their aching feet in warm water after the race.
28- Cover yourself against sunburn.
30- Coughing is an early symptom of lung disease.
31- She has There are tiny dents in my thumb nail and little finger nail.
32- Video games can be quite addictive for young kids.
33- Some people drink coffee to keep stay alert at night.
34- Please behave yourselves when we visit grandma.
35- This coffee has a bitter taste.
36- I should try to boost improve my vocabulary.
37- I think I was brewing coffee.
38- Some smokers use hypnosis to try and kick the habit.
39- I was about to tell her, but at that instant the phone range.
40- The chair was put in a mild acid bath to remove the paint.
41- It's odorless.
42- jon John was worried that the cup might fall, for it stood on the edge of the table.
34- Caffeine is a chemical stimulant.

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