Prague - is my homework, Can you check please?

The Czech Republic is situated in the Central of Europe.  It borders with Poland on in the north, with Germany on in the west, with Austria on in the south and with Slovakia on in the east. The capital of Czech Republic is Prague. There are 13 regions in C.R.
and the population is over 10 millions.

The cost of living is constantly rising. 1The climate is temperate. Summer is warm but winter is cold and wet.  The language is Czech but old men the older generation knows Russian. But if you want to get more polite answers it would be better to use English because all young men know English perfectly and they do not like The Russians (because of The Second World War) It is better to use English since most in the current generation speaks English.  They disdain Russian because of the Second World War.

If you want to visit C.R., my country, I will advise you to begin base your travel from Prague. Prague It is one of the most beautiful cities in Europe and . Prague is situated along the longest river in C.R. It is called Vltava River which is the longest in the country. Prague is city which has got There are many old and narrow streets in the central district of the city. For moving in Prague you can It is very convenient to use the Metro, buses and trams. Buses and trams run regularly according to  go by schedule. The tickets are sold in shops, metro stations and train stations. You need only one ticket for the entire transport system. all kinds of transports. There are many national great restaurants in Prague. Meat and fish dishes are very tasty but also very calorific high in calories. The cheapest places for eat it is called the Buffett. There where you can get only taste our national dishes.  However, there is no place for sitting; only stand up dining! ood and you cannot sit. And in the end the national drink of course is beer. Our national beverage is, of course, beer.

If you like enjoy historical building such as Gothic architecture, old historical towers, cathedrals and churches, castles and palaces,  all of them you can see in Prague and in another other old towns are full of them. of Czech Republic.

If you want to improve your health are health conscious, you should go to visit Karlovy Vary.   to drink Their mineral water is very beneficial.

The Czech Republic is very family oriented place to go.  safety place for traveling with children. It is very calm country with good people, We are friendly people and there are many places of interest to visit and our cuisine is one of the best.  good food, beautiful sightseeing and with good beer.
I advice to visit this country because it is not expensive and close to Russia you can get there by plane, train and bus.

My country is an inexpensive place to visit.  Russia is close by and you can easily get there by bus, train or plane.

1.   The cost of living in your country has nothing to do with the physical description of your country.  It should not be here.  It is totally unrelated.  Group it somewhere in the essay when you talk about daily in your country.  Your conclusion also contradicts what you are saying.

Prague - is my homework, Can you check please?

The Czech Republic is situated in the Central of Europe.

It borders with Poland to the north, with Germany to the west, with Austria to the south and with Slovakia to the east.
The capital of The Czech Republic is Prague.
There are 13 regions in C.R.
Population is over 10 millions.
Cost of living is constantly rising.
Climate is temperate. Summer is warm but winter is cold and wet.
Language is Czech but old people know Russian. However, if you want to get more polite answers it would be better to use English, because all young people know English perfectly and they do not like The Russians (because of The Second World War).
If you want to visit C.R., I will advise you to begin your visit with Prague. Prague is one of the most beautiful cities in Europe. Prague is situated along the longest river in C.R. It is called the Vltava River. Prague is a city with many old and narrow streets in the central area. To move about in Prague you can use the Metro, buses and trams. Buses and trams go by schedule. The tickets are sold in shops, metro stations and train stations. You need only one ticket for all kinds of transports. There are many national restaurants in Prague. Meat and fish dishes are very high in calories. The cheapest places to eat are called Buffett. There you can get only national food and you cannot sit. And finally, the national drink of course is beer.
If you like gothic, old towers, cathedrals and churches, castles and palaces, you can see all of them you can see in Prague and in another old towns of The Czech Republic.
If you want to improve your health you should go to Karlovy Vary to drink mineral water.
Czech Republic is a very safety place for traveling with children. It is a very peaceful country with good people, good food, beautiful sightseeing and with good beer.
I advise you to visit this country because it is not expensive and close to Russia. You can get there by plane, train and bus.

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Prague - is my homework, Can you check it please?

The Czech Republic is situated in the Central of Europe.

It borders with Poland to the north, with Germany to the west, with Austria to the south and with Slovakia to the east.
The capital of the Czech Republic is Prague.
There are 13 regions in the C.R.
With a population of over 10,000,000.
The cost of living is constantly rising. 
The climate is temperate. Summer is warm but winter is cold and wet. 
The official language is Czech, but the older generation knows Russian. However if you want to get more polite answers, it would be better to use English since the younger generation knows English perfectly and they do not like The Russians (because of World War II)
If you want to visit the C.R., I suggest you to begin your travels in Prague. Prague is one of the most beautiful cities in Europe and is situated along the longest river in the C.R. - the Vltava River. Prague is a city with many old and narrow streets in its center. For transportation in Prague you can use the Metro, buses and Trams. Buses and trams run according to a schedule. The tickets are sold in shops, metro stations and train stations. You need only one ticket for all the different modes of transportation. There are many traditional restaurants in Prague. Meat and fish dishes are very high in calories. The cheapest places for eat are called Buffett. There you can get only traditional food and there is no seating. The national drink of course is beer.
If you like gothic architecture, old towers, cathedrals and churches, castles and palaces, you can visit these in Prague and in another old towns in the Czech Republic.
If you want to improve your health you should go to Karlovy Vary to drink mineral water.
Traveling with children in the Czech Republic is very safety. It is very calm country with good people, good food, beautiful sightseeing and with good beer.
I recommend you visit this country because it is inexpensive and close to Russia, which is accessible by plane, train or bus.