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Introducing myself hi. i'm kelly i want to be a english teacher, so this is the reason why i 'm learing english. i become 16 in this month. i have 4 family members and i love to listening musics and watching movies i live in incheon, korea. i go to Bakmun girls' highschool and i am 10th grade. i think i am good at listening somepeople's word. so i prefer listening to speaking. and i am confusing about my two choices : going abroad or staying in korea Thank you

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Introducing myself

RED - caplitalize "I" and the first letter of names and the first word of each sentence.
                                Names of languages too. Names of places (cities) also.
BLUE - spelling
GREEN - better way to say / corrected

Hi. I'm Kelly
I want to be an English teacher, so this is the reason why I'm learning english.
I will become 16 in this month.
I have 4 family members and i love to listening  to musics and watching movies.
I live in Incheon, Korea.

I go to Bakmun Girls' Highschool and I am  in the 10th grade.

I think I am good at listening to people talk, so I prefer listening to speaking.
I am confused about two choices. : Going abroad or staying in Korea

Thank you


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Introducing myself

Hi. I'm Kelly.
I want to be an English teacher, which is why i 'm learing english.
I turn 16 in this month. (If you're already 16 use "turned" if not, "turn")
I have 4 family members and i love to listening music and watching movies. 
I live in Incheon, Korea.
I go to Bakmun girls' highschool and i am in 10th grade.
i think i am good at listening somepeople's word. 
so i prefer listening to speaking. (Were you trying to say: I prefer to listen to people talking, rather than reading?)
and I am confused about my two choices : going abroad or staying in korea

Thank you
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If you don't want to be a friend please decline my invitation.
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Capitalization Rules Capitalization Rules Capitalize the first word of a sentence Capitalize the pronoun "I" Capitalize proper nouns : persons, places / things, names of people · Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. Capitalize days of the week, holidays, and months of the year. Do not capitalize seasons. Capitalize countries, languages, and nationalities (adjective form of a specific country) Capitalize titles that come before names. Do not capitalize titles that follow names. Capitalize letter salutations (openings) and closings Capitalize the first word in a quote. Capitalize content words in titles. Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry
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Introducing myself

hi. i'm kelly
i want to be a english teacher, so this is the reason why i 'm learing english.
i become 16 in this month.
i have 4 family members and i love to listening musics and watching movies
i live in incheon, korea.
i go to Bakmun girls' highschool and i am 10th grade.
i think i am good at listening somepeople's word.
so i prefer listening to speaking.
and i am confusing about my two choices : going abroad or staying in korea

Thank you


Note:
Always capitalize the pronoun 'I' and the first word of every sentence.

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