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Birthday girl Today is my lunar birthday. I get up early today, then take a shower, haha!, dance in the morning. I want to eat fish in the morning , so I cook fish according to methods of seasoning packet. Yummy! I still want to eat fish. Another colleague asked me , why did you cook fish in the morning? Because I go back home too later in the evening yesterday. After this , I am so tired and want to sleepy. I also send a message to my friend yesterday, but he replies that what's up? and I've been very well now .Original I want to tell him, today is my birthday. I think it’s meaningless. A person should be proud to live.

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Birthday girl (better with: Lunar Birthday)

Today is my lunar birthday. I got up early today (better with: this morning), then and tooke a shower, and then, haha!, I danced in the morning. I wanted to eat fish in the morning. So, I cooked fish according to methods of the directions given on the seasoning packet. It was yummy, and I still wanted to eat more fish.


Another Some colleague asked me: "Why did you cook fish in the morning?" (N.B. For indirect speech version, please refer to the revision done by Reviewer Jeff)

I answered: "I did that because I go went back home too later in the evening yesterday. Thereafter this , I am was so tired and just wanted to sleepy."

I also sent a message to my friend yesterday. but He just replied, that "what's up?" and I replied him that I've been very well now so far._Originally, I wanted to tell him, that today is (better with: would be) my birthday. However, I think that it’s (in formal writing: it is) meaningless because everyone has a birthday anyway. A person should be proud to live.

 

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Happy lunar birthday and good weekend. / 祝 農曆生辰 以及 週末愉快。

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Birthday girl

Today is my lunar birthday. I get got up early today, then take and took a shower.  , haha!, Then dance classes 1 in the morning. I want to eat fish in the morning , and so I cooked the fish according to methods the directions on the of seasoning packet. It was yummy! I still want to eat more fish. Another colleague asked me , why did you I like to cook fish in the morning? This is because when I go back get home too later in the evening yesterday. After this , I am will be so tired and want to sleepy. I also sent a message to my friend yesterday, but he replies his reply was just a "that What's up?" and I've been very well now I replied back to say I am fine. Originally, I wanted to tell him, that today is my birthday. I think it’s it is meaningless to remind others that it is your birthday today. A person should be proud to live. This last sentence is 画蛇添足.  The previous line is good enough to stand on its own as conclusion.

 

1.  Not sure if I am correct.  You could have dance around because you are happy on your birthday.  Happy birthday Sanny!

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Birthday girl

Today is my lunar birthday. I get up early today, then take a shower, haha!, dance in the morning. I want to eat fish in the morning , so I cook fish according to methods of seasoning packet. Yummy! I still want to eat fish. Another colleague asked me , why did you cook fish in the morning? Because I go back home too later in the evening yesterday. After this , I am so tired and want to sleep. I also send a message to my friend yesterday, but he replies that what's up? and I've been very well now .Originaly I want to tell him, today is my birthday. I think it’s meaningless. A person should be proud to live.

 

Have Fun dear

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Thanks for you all best wishes ! Wish happiness Forever
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English speakers do say "birthday girl". That isn't something that will show up in classroom English and it is sort of obscure....you only get to call half the population that, and only once a year per person, so It isn't surprising that a student of English as a second language may not have heard it.

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