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Birthday girl (better with: Lunar Birthday)
Today is my lunar birthday. I got up early today (better with: this morning), then and tooke a shower, and then, haha!, I danced in the morning. I wanted to eat fish in the morning. So, I cooked fish according to methods of the directions given on the seasoning packet. It was yummy, and I still wanted to eat more fish.
Another Some colleague asked me: "Why did you cook fish in the morning?" (N.B. For indirect speech version, please refer to the revision done by Reviewer Jeff)
I answered: "I did that because I go went back home too later in the evening yesterday. Thereafter this , I am was so tired and just wanted to sleepy."
I also sent a message to my friend yesterday. but He just replied, that "what's up?" and I replied him that I've been very well now so far._Originally, I wanted to tell him, that today is (better with: would be) my birthday. However, I think that it’s (in formal writing: it is) meaningless because everyone has a birthday anyway. A person should be proud to live.
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Happy lunar birthday and good weekend. / 祝 農曆生辰 以及 週末愉快。
Birthday girl
Today is my lunar birthday. I get got up early today, then take and took a shower. , haha!, Then dance classes 1 in the morning. I want to eat fish in the morning , and so I cooked the fish according to methods the directions on the of seasoning packet. It was yummy! I still want to eat more fish. Another colleague asked me , why did you I like to cook fish in the morning? This is because when I go back get home too later in the evening yesterday. After this , I am will be so tired and want to sleepy. I also sent a message to my friend yesterday, but he replies his reply was just a "that What's up?" and I've been very well now I replied back to say I am fine. Originally, I wanted to tell him, that today is my birthday. I think it’s it is meaningless to remind others that it is your birthday today. A person should be proud to live. This last sentence is 画蛇添足. The previous line is good enough to stand on its own as conclusion.
1. Not sure if I am correct. You could have dance around because you are happy on your birthday. Happy birthday Sanny!
Birthday girl
Today is my lunar birthday. I get up early today, then take a shower, haha!, dance in the morning. I want to eat fish in the morning , so I cook fish according to methods of seasoning packet. Yummy! I still want to eat fish. Another colleague asked me , why did you cook fish in the morning? Because I go back home too later in the evening yesterday. After this , I am so tired and want to sleep. I also send a message to my friend yesterday, but he replies that what's up? and I've been very well now .Originaly I want to tell him, today is my birthday. I think it’s meaningless. A person should be proud to live.
Have Fun dear
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