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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Me, Alice, 31 years old, now work as a sales assistant , we have a branch in USA, I translate the English files everyday, to work better and commnuicate with customers better, I want to speak and listen English just like a English Native person. If you are Native English and want to speak and listen like a Chinese Native Person, let's work together and reach our target goal.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Me, Alice, 31 years old, now work as a sales assistant. We have a branch in the USA.<fullstop> I translate the English files everyday. <full stop> To work better and commnuicate with customers better I want to speak and listen to English just like an English native person. If you are native English and want to speak and listen like a Chinese native person, let's work together and reach our target goal.

As above, your introduction is like that of a native speaker. On finer points.

In written ENglish though, we need separate sentences where Chinese seems to use comma-connected clauses.

"translate the English files" could be correct, but reads strangely without any introduction about which English files you mean.

"English native person" I went for English native, though this sounds a little strange. You could try "native English speaker".
Similarly, "if you are a native English" could become ... if you are a native English speaker and  ...

"target goal" seems a little redundant: Either would be sufficient on its own.
 

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You already speak English like a native person. What you wrote here is fluent and natural. I'm not sure what more you need to learn on this website.

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