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Paying Back The warm weather awakened me today. I enjoyed the breathtaking smell of the muddy ground. If you look through my window, you would appreciate the beauty and liveliness of the peach blossoms in their full bloom. As if they are paying you back something. I'm not talking about a flower paying for your coffee or drink!:))))) Flowers may be priceless in the beauty they bring to a street, park, garden, house, room or even life. In that sense they do us a favour and we are the ones who need to pay back their generosity. Always be polite to flowers, otherwise they would need to choose who deserves favours:))) And I do not want to catch you red handed picking up flowers:))) Talking about paying back, I remember something! Those who owe me money, you can either say goodbye to your luxurious watch or send me a ticket to Elton John's sold out show! Only that would save your neck! Have a nice day.:)) Seda, you are a priceless flower and this was written for the sake of your eyes. Cheer up, Please.

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As per your request.

 

Paying Back Pay Me Back!


The warm weather awakened woke 1 me today. I enjoyed the breathtaking smell of the earthiness of the muddy ground. If you can look through my window, you would will appreciate the beauty and liveliness the life surrounding of the peach blossoms in the peak of their full bloom. It is as if it is payback time for them to they arepaying you back something. I'm not talking don't mean that they are going to treat you to a cup of coffee or a drink! about a flower paying for your coffee or drink!:))))) Flowers may be are (be more assertive!)priceless in the beauty as they bring beauty and life to a street, park, garden, house or a room.   or even Your life will surely improve in their presence. In that sense they do us a favour and we are the ones who need to pay back their generosity. It is us, who owe them a favour for their generosity.


Always be polite to flowers, otherwise they may choose someone else to show their favours to. Don't let me  would need to choose who deserves favours:))) And I do not want to catch you red handed plucking them for yourself!  They are here for everyone!  picking up flowers:)))

Talking about paying back, now I remembered something! Those who owe me money, you can either say goodbye to your luxurious luxury watch or send me a ticket to for Elton John's sold out concert show! Only that would this will save your neck!

Have a nice day.:))

Seda, you are a priceless flower and this was written for the sake of your eyes. Please cheer up Please.

 

Plucky as usual. Great!

 

1.  If I had corrected your sentence into, "The warm weather had awakened me today", it could have a figurative meaning which doesn't seem to match your intent.

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Paying Back


The warm weather awakened me today. I enjoyed the breathtaking smell of the muddy ground. If you look through my window, you would appreciate the beauty and liveliness of the peach blossoms in their full bloom, as if they are paying you back something. I'm not talking about a flower paying for your coffee or drink!:))))) Flowers may be priceless in the beauty they bring to a street, park, garden, house, room or even life. In that sense they do us a favour, though we are the ones who need to pay back their generosity.

Always be polite to flowers, otherwise they would need to choose who deserves favours:))) I do not want to catch you red handed picking up flowers:)))

Talking about paying back, I remember something! To those who owe me money, you can either say goodbye to your luxurious watch or send me a ticket to Elton John's sold out show! Only that would save your neck!

Have a nice day.:))

Seda, you are a priceless flower and this was written for the sake of your eyes. Cheer up, Please.

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Reading compliments is my hobby, C.J..hahah..Thank you again:))))))))))
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It was really nice to meet you too. I am really interested in learning about your culture because it is really interesting to me. You do express emotions and feelings through words well, which is also impressive :))
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And nice to meet you too:))

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