First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello ^^
My name is Hyunho Park.
Nice to meet you. I can speak English well, so I want to learn English.
Do you can help me?
I believe that your gonna be a good friend.
God bless you!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello ^^
My name is Hyunho Park.
Nice to meet you. I can speak English well, so I want to learn English.
Do you can help me?
I believe that you gonna be a good friend.
Do you konw 'kakao Talk'? This is smartphone`s application. If you use kakao talk, you send a text to me. Also my facebook address is ' [email protected] '. I will wait for your message.

God bless you!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,  ^^<<<< 문장의 시작 부분에  첫 째 글자를 항상 대문자로 써야 합니다.

My name is Hyunho Park.

Nice to meet you. I can't speak English (very) well, so I want to learn to improve my English skills/ability.

Can you help me? <<<  영어 어순을 공부하세요!

I hope we'll become good friends. <<  이게 맞는 표현이에요.

God bless you! < 아니요. 여기는 이게 진짜 적절하지 않아요.  너무 많이 종교처럼 들려요. 단 말은: Bye for now! 이나 Thanks for correcting my lesson!

 당신의모국어로설명할수있고언어로말할수있는당신의배우고싶은사람으로부터항상배워야돼요.제가요즘많이바쁘기때문에. 앞으로글을수정해주는사람에게만수정해줄거예요. 당신의영어능력을향상할수있다면, 전계속수정할거에요.기억하세요. 당신은많은선생님들이필요하지않아요.  당신은  좋은선생님을단필요해요. 기억해주세요 .  도움을받기위해서는여러분도  자연히도움을줘야겠죠?수정된내용을시간을내서공부하시면좋겠어요.집중해서공부하세요. 

그건대문자로써야합니다. 

바꿔쓸수있는표현은제가추천하는더자연스럽고일반적인방법의표현입니다.

오타, 또는수정이필요한부분그리고단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다. 

밑줄이있을때는알맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.

보라색이저의코멘트입니다.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello ^^
My name is Hyunho Park.
Nice to meet you. I can speak English well, so I want to learn English.
Do you Can you help me?
I believe that you are gonna/(going to)be a good friend.
God bless you!