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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to learn English because nowadays it is very important when you want to find a job and I would like to learn much this language. I want be a big actor, so I think that I need this language for this dream.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i want to learn english because nowadays it is very important when you want to find a job and i would also like to learn many language. i want to be a *famous actors, so i think that i need this language for *this dream.
*: I'm guessing the 'biggest' you wrote refers to 'famous' or maybe 'popular'
*:you may also use 'the' because you've written what is your dream before
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I'm not a native english speaker but I want to try to help~
I hope this helped :)
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