Do You Like Cherry Blossoms?  그게 제목이에요, (당신은) 몰랐어요? 대문자를사용해야돼요.   

It's spring in Korea, a time people (couples) get together. (spend time together).

All around us, cherry blossom trees sway in the breeze, especially where I go to school. 

The college campus here is a popular place where all Koreans come to go on a picnic, a date, or to just relax. 

According to recent statistics, this campus actually has the highest proprotion of green space when compared to other college campus' in Korea. (has more green space than any other campus in Korea). <<<< 

Please feel free to visit sometime andn enjoy the beautiful swaying apple blossom trees with the rest of us.  Why don't you come and have an unforgettable time with uncountable shyly-smiling blossoms quietly jumping over at you?

그건대문자로써야합니다. 

바꿔쓸수있는표현은제가추천하는더자연스럽고일반적인방법의표현입니다.

오타, 또는수정이필요한부분그리고단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다. 

밑줄이있을때는알맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.

보라색이저의코멘트입니다.

------ (이것이도움이됐으면좋겠습니다)

Do you like Cherry blossom?

These days in Korea, there are cherry blossoms swaying in the breeze of spring.

Especially at my campus, it is sort of a nationwide popular place to mingle together. Many come here to have a picnic, a date or simply take a rest.

According to a statistic data, my campus is more eco-friendly than other campuses.
(I'm not sure is this what you're trying to tell us?)

Why don't you come and have an unforgettable time with these countless shyly-smiling blossoms quietly dancing over at you?

Do you like Cherry blossom?

These days in Korea, everytime when people get mingled, everywhere there are cherry blossom flowers swaying in the breeze of spring.

Especially at my campus, it is sort of a popular place nationwide to go to a picnic, have a date or take some time off.

According to some statistic data, the campus actually has the highest proportion of parks and trees in comparison to the campus area.

Why don't you come and have an unforgettable time with the uncountable shyly-smiling blossoms quietly hovering over you?