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好好一天的下文的下文! This is my final writing to some of your requests in continuation of my last weekend's saga. Thanks... You are gave me such wonderful suggestions and inspirations :) The article appears in the correction box as usual.

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請修改一下. 謝謝.

 

好好的一天的下文的下文!

 

今日是星期一了. 天要捉弄我. 偏偏被困在辦公室內而外面有萬道陽光歡照,把個南加洲一片大地温暖起來. 而我呢? 只能妬忌地睄睄窗外的情境. 真氣殺我也! 好在今天所有的電腦軟体問題都已經解决了又早已批發給屬下去辦了. 現在放晏1, 為了減肥只叫人買些沙律2回來. 這样才可以避免美食廣塲中所有香噴噴3的誘惑! 乘有停機時間可以揮筆學習寫中文.

 

人生路上的行人只知來不知去. 富在深山有遠親, 貧居鬧市無人問! 人性就是這樣. 要樂不要哀. 但無哀不知樂從來, 無苦不知甜. 俗語說得好, 馬馴被人騎, 人善被人欺. 權貴千世羨, 窮賤萬人踩. 人的說話可以扭轉乾坤. 是富有就稱為財大氣粗, 非富即為污糟4鬼5!有時總覺得若我英文不是超良, 誰會來理睬我. 另一方面亦有人指責我夸多斗靡! 我会在乎嗎. 非也. 只有天知地曉. 唯我自明良心懂.

 

想話6繼續多咆哮一下. 但好可惜呀… 兔仔的食物已經到了!

 

Today is Monday and Heaven is playing a joke on me.  Why it must be in the middle of the week that I am imprisoned in the office while tons of sunshine is shining happily outside with all of Southern California being warmed up. And what of me?  All I can do is to peer outside of the window in envy. It’s killing me, Larry1!

 

Luckily, all this morning’s software problems had been solved and are being assigned to my subordinates to take care of the details.  It is now lunchtime.  As I am going on a diet, I asked someone to bring back some salad for me.  This is the only way I can avoid all those tempting aromas from the food court.  Taking this opportunity, I begin this essay.

 

In this road of life, passer-bys only notice those entering but not the leaving ones.  There are always distant relatives when you are rich, even if you live in the remote mountains.  When you are poor in the busiest of cities, nary will anyone inquire about you!  Human nature is thus - joys to be had but never sorrows.  Now, without sorrow whence joy will come from? Without bitterness, sweetness is but unknown.  How apt the saying is, “A tame horse will be ridden by people just as the kindred will be bullied.  Millions will go goo-goo gaga over the rich and powerful but the destitute will be trodden by the very ones.  Still people’s tongues will turn and twist things around.  If you are rich, then you are known as the filthy rich.  If you have no money then you are the dirty poor! Sometimes, I felt that if my English is not that great, who would notice me?  On the other hand, others will accuse that I am a show off.  So do I care? No, I don’t.  Heaven knows, Earth knows, I know and my conscience knows.

 

Of course I can continue ranting on but alas, the rabbit food is here.

 

Monday, March 26, 2012

 

1.   午飯時間到了. 可以去吃.

2.   沙拉

3.   形容飃搖的香氣

4.   齷齪,骯髒

5.   不是包括廣東人在內, 他們喜歡稱別人為鬼! 例如美國鬼, 鬼妹, 鬼婆, 鬼仔(白種男兒), 鬼佬 (比較老些的白種男人)

6. 還想

 

 

1.  Just a play of words from a series of advertisements in California where the owner of a sleeping mattress chain store, Larry, is offering huge discounts while his accountant is screaming, “Larry, you are killing me!” as the punch line.

 

 

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人生路上的行人只知来不知去。富在深山有远亲,贫居闹市无人问!人性就是这样。要乐不要哀。但无哀不知乐从来,。无苦不知甜。俗语说得好,马驯被人骑,人善被人欺。权贵千世羡,穷贱万人踩。人的说话可以扭转乾坤。是富有就称为财大气粗,non-富即为污糟4鬼5!有时总觉得若号我英文不是超1529,谁会来理睬号我。另一方面亦有人指责我夸多斗靡!我会在乎吗。非也。只有天知地晓。唯我自明良心懂。

 

漫漫人生路,知来不知去。富在深山有远亲,贫居闹市无人问。趋乐避哀,人性使然。但无哀不知乐何来,无苦不知甜滋味。俗话说的好,马驯被人骑,人善被人欺。权贵千世羡,穷贱万人踩。人言可畏,能扭转乾坤:富有尊为财大气粗,贫穷贬做污糟鬼!有时总觉得,若非我英文优异,谁又会给予半点理睬?!亦有人指责我夸多斗靡,我在乎吗,切。良心为证,天知地晓。

 

天下熙熙,皆为利来。兄台无需介怀

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請修改一下. 謝謝.

 

《好好的一天》的下文的下文!

 

今日是星期一了. 天要捉弄我. 偏偏被困在辦公室內而外面有萬道陽光歡照,把整個南加洲一片大地温暖起來. 而我呢? 只能妬忌地睄睄窗外的情境美景. 真氣殺我也! 好在今天所有的電腦軟体問題都已經解决了又早已批下發給屬下去辦了. 現在放晏1, 為了減肥只叫人買些沙律2回來. 這样才可以躲避免美食廣塲中所有香噴噴3的誘惑! 乘有停機時間乘此间息才可以揮筆學習寫中文.

 

人生路上的行人们只知來不知去. 富在深山有遠親, 貧居鬧市無人問! 人性就是這樣. 要求樂不要而躲哀. 但哪知無哀不知樂從來, 無苦不知甜. 俗語說得好, 馬馴被人騎, 人善被人欺. 權貴千世羨, 窮賤萬人踩. 人说的說話可以扭轉乾坤(人言可畏?). 是富有就稱為財大氣粗, 非富即為污糟4鬼5!有時總覺得若我英文不是超良, 誰會來理睬我. 另一方面亦有人指責我夸多斗靡! 我会在乎嗎. 非也. 只唯有天知地曉. 唯我亦自明良心懂.

 

想話6(原想)繼續多咆哮一下. 但好可惜呀… 兔仔的食物已經到了!

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我这个是普通话版本,有些可能和粤语对不上缝,仅做参考吧:)

美好的一天

今天是星期一.天公弄人,户外阳光普照,让整个南加州温暖起来,而我偏偏被困在(阴冷)的办公室里.只能妒忌地看着窗外的春色."真气煞我也!"我把所有的电脑软件问题逐一分配给属下去处理,好在现在已经全部解决了.现在是午休时间.为了减肥,我请人只捎回些沙拉,这样才可以避免我被美食广场中所有的香喷喷所诱惑.乘此良机,我正好可以执笔学习写中文了.

路上皆行人,知来不知去.富在深山有远亲,贫居闹市无人问!人性就是如此."要乐不要哀"但无哀哪知乐何来,无苦怎知甜滋味?俗语说得好,马驯被人欺,人善被人欺.权贵千世羡,穷贱万人踩.言语可以扭转乾坤.富有可以被称为财大气粗,没钱就被称为穷鬼!有时候我怀疑如果我的英语不是那么好,谁会来理我呢?另一方面,也有人指责我夸多斗靡.我会在乎吗?非也!!用心良苦,苍天可鉴!

本想继续咆哮发泄,但好可惜呀..小兔子的食物已经到啦!

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