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I dreamed a horrible dream. Let me share it to with everybody here.

"Maybe it was something you ate before you went to bed..." That's what some people blame nightmares on.

There are many strange & and cruel murders at the time of year occurring in the city. In case To preventing the similar cases from happening again, the headmaster assembles all the students together to see the watch a news documentary of about the deaths to warn the students to be careful.

to see (to sense with your eyes), to look at (to examine something), to watch (to look at something for a longer period of time)

and After the video finishes, they put the a smart psychic dog into the classroom. (The dog‘s nose can predict the death.) after finishing video. It The dog comes to me directly and bites me (but it does not hurt). That is the first sign of my coming death.

A person who can see ghosts or foretell the future is psychic.

Before One hour to before the coming arrival of the Death, there are some fuzzy characters suddenly appear on the a rock near the a well suddenly. It One of them says the next one person will to die with the will be carrying tissues. I am amazed surprised, because I take have tissues with me. Then the ring alarm bell rings. We should go back to the classroom because the Death is on the way.

I decide to go to the washroom as quickly as possible. Then I enter the washroom, turn right, but it becomes a dark & and old kitchen. I can hardly see nothing anything. What I hear is the girls' laughter and pouring running water from the washroom nearby.

I run to the left, the same with then to the right. I see old stuff covered with dust are everywhere. I am scared. My conscious mind tells me I should leave here.

I run out of the washroom (kitchen) with supersonic speed. The outside becomes a desert. There is only wind and an old wooden house which would could fall down anytime. The Death is coming, so I have to hide in the house.

I see the Death ride riding the a bike coming towards the direction of me from the a slit in the wall. He suddenly disappears with in a the blink of my an eyes.

Was Death riding a bicycle or a motorcycle? "Bike" can be interpreted as either one.

"In the blink of an eye" is an expression that means "instantly."

Then I can feel there is another one someone else in the house behind me, but I dare not turn back around. I can't imagine what I would see. So I choose to waking wake up!!!!!!!! SCARY!!!!!!

You told a great story! I enjoyed it! :)