First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello there)

My name is Aleksandr. I live in the Russia, Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I am 22 years old. First of all, I am a student. Now I studying at the 5 level, specializing in . My speciality is a optical technology ies. I'm am not really interested at in my profession. Maybe I will get the a second degree education in the near future.
I like to travel because it is I always meet new people, see interesting cultures and beautifull places. Also I like to watch movies. cinema. 1 My favourite films are The Shawshank Redemption, Fight Club, The Sixth Sense, Shutter Island, Mulholland Dr., Inception, The Ring,, Knockin' on Heaven's Door 2 and many others. I like music too. My favourite bands are 30 seconds to Mars, Coldplay, Maroon 5, and Travis. I like reading, but I don't do not have enough time for it. However, I read 2-3 two to three 3 books in a month. My favourite writers are Stephen King and Chuck Palahniuk.

I study English because it is international language. Also this summer I went am going to the USA at 4 for four mounths.

Wow!  4 months! (I can use 4 here because I treat my comments as informal writing whereas I treat your essay as a formal piece!)  Where are you going to in the USA?  Drop by if you are in LA :)

1.  Cinema is the place you watch movies.  Also cinema can mean the field of making movies, production etc.

2.  Titles are to be quoted.  However, in this case where there are so many, it would make the text look messy.  So using italics is another way to do so.

3.  Spell out small numbers.  You can use numeral for larger numbers except for hundred, thousand, million or so on where there is a name for it.  Dates, time, temperature can be denoted in numerals.  Same thing for fractions.  Spell out when there is a name for it, half, quarter and so on.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello there)
My name is Aleksandr. I live in the Russia, Saint-Petersburg. I am 22 years old.
First of all, I am a student. Now I study at the 5 level. My speciality is a optical technologies. I'm not really interested in my profession. Maybe I will get the second education in the near future.
I like travel because it is always new people, interesting cultures, beautifull places. Also I like cinema. My favourite films are The Shawshank Redemption, Fight Club, The Sixth Sense, Shutter Island, Mulholland Dr., Inception, The Ring,, Knockin' on Heaven's Door and many others. I like music too. My favourite bands are 30 seconds to Mars, Coldplay, Maroon 5, Travis. I like reading, but I don't have enough time for it. However I read 2-3 books in a month. My favourite writes are Stephen King and Chuck Palahniuk.
I study english because it is international language. Also this summer I went to the USA at 4 mounth.