Hebrew Self Introduction

Shalom,


Shmi Alexandra Rais. Ani siema siyamti Mekalelet michlala be December im taor toar rishon. Acshav, achshav ani mehapeset avodah. Ani rotza lilmod likrot be Ivrit. Ani lo yehola likroh bli hatnuot (vowel).

"siema" is the female, past tense, third-person of "finished", it stands for "she finished". Since you talk about yourself it should be written "siyamti" which is the past tense, first-person form of "finished", so it stands for "I finished".

I guess "Mekalelet" stands for "college", however it is the construct state of the word "michlala". If you want to say for example "college of New York" then you say "michlelet new york" (what you wrote as "mekalelet" is a distorted form of the transcription of "michlelet").

So in short, "michlala" stands for "college" while "michlelet" stands for "college of ...".

"avodah" is a fine transcription, however we Israelis are used to write transcription for words in the exact way they sound, so I would write this transcription as "avoda".

As for "likroh", I think the "h" wouldn't be needed because in Hebrew there's no letter "h"e" in the end of this word. A better transcription would be "likro".

Except for that, everything else is well written.

Have a nice day, Ofer ;)