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Union is Strength
A rich man who had three sons. He sons fell ill. He got received medical treatment but could not recover. When he lost all hope, he of life. He sent for all his sons who always used to altercate fight with each other. He gave them a bundle of sticks and ordered them to break it by turns. Each of them tried hard to break it but they could not. After this, there their father said to his told the younger son that he had untied to untie the bundle and he did so. The father gave each of them a single stick and ordered them to break it and everyone broke it theirs very easily. Then the father advised said to them, [CAM1]"United you stand and divided you fall.”
[CAM1]When using quotes, you should use a space before them and the word comes immediately after; the closing quotes should come immediately after the word or the punctuation mark.
Union is In Strength
A rich man had three sons. He fell ill. He got medical treatment but could did not recover even with the best of care. When he lost all hope of life. He sent for all his bickering sons as he lay dying. who always used to altercate with each other. He gave them a bundle of sticks and ordered them to break it by turns. Each of them tried hard to break it but they could not. Each tried but could not do so. After this theire The father said to his younger son that he had untied the bundle and he did so. asked that the bundle be untied and gave the father gave each of them brother a single stick and ordered them to break it and everyone broke it very easily. Every brother was able to do so with ease. then The father said, advised them," United you stand, and divided you fall.
Union is strength
A rich man had three sons. He fell ill. He got medical treatment but could not recover. When he lost all hope of life. (This is not a complete sentence it is a dependent clause so you either need to get rid of the "when" or add something else after this) He sent for all his sons who always used to altercate argue with each other. He gave them a bundle of sticks and ordered them to break it by turns. Each of them tried hard to break it but they could not. After this there their father said to his younger son that he had to untied the bundle and he did so. The father gave each of them a single stick and ordered them to break it and everyone broke it very easily. Then the father advised them, "United you stand and divided you fall."
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