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Record something Yesterday, i had my first operation in my life, scared, upset. After being infused anesthetic, i was out of consciousness and had a dream. Unknow how i woke up, i found i was in a daze and took to the bed-ward. Nobody was accompanied with me for i did not want to bother and worry my friends. However, in bed-ward, i was the one alone while other girls beside were with their bfs. My tears were out of control and a sence of sorrow swept. After post-treament, i took bus and went back school. watching Guangzhou Tower, IFC,such grant skycrapers passing by, Audi, BMW,such luxury cars winding, A thought floats in my mind that sometimes life is so fragile that can not withdraw any hurt and what we should pursue in our life. We are intended to neglec the ensence of life.

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Yesterday, i had my first operation surgery in my life. I was scared and upset. After being infused given anesthetic, i was out of unconsciousness and had a dream. Unknow When I woke up how i woke up, i found i was in a daze and took to the bed-ward. Nobody was accompanied with me, for i did not want to bother and or worry my friends. However, in the bed-ward, i was the one alone while other girls beside were with their bfs. My tears were out of control and a sence sense of sorrow swept over me.
After post-treament, i took the/a bus and went back school. While watching Guangzhou Tower, IFC, giant skycrapers, passing by Audi and BMW luxury cars passing by, a thought floats in my mind, that sometimes life is so fragile that you/we can not withdraw any hurt and that what we should pursue in our life. We are not intended to neglec the ensence of life.

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i am not sure what you mean in last sentence :)
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Yesterday, i had my first operation in my life,i was scared, upset. After being infused anesthetic, i lost consciousness and had a dream. Unknowing how i woke up, i realized i was in a dazed and put on the bed-ward. Nobody was accompaning  me . any my friend was not worring me. However, in bed-ward, i was  alone while other girls beside were with their bfs. My tears were out of control and it was scene of sorrow.
After post-treament, i took bus and went back school. watching Guangzhou Tower, IFC,such grant skycrapers passing by Audi, BMW,such luxury cars , A thought floats in my mind that sometimes life is so fragile that can not withdraw any hurt and what we should pursue in our life. We are intended to neglec the ensence of life.

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You will get well soon,take care!Don't think too much.Go back to school and take a deep sleep,have rich meals and talk with your friends,be happy!Best wishes!

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