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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name Svetlana.
I live in capital Repablic Tatarstan - Kazan.
Kazan is very-very big tawn.
Ia am shef department HR.
I like write book for children.
I have 2 books - fairy tall.
Many children reading my books.
I like fitness, travelling, musik.
I like travelling , bekous i want learn English for dialog.
Correct English:
My name is Sventlana.
I live in Kazan the capital of the Republic of Tatarstan.
Kazan is a very large town. (might want to use city instead of town)
I am the chief of the Human Resources department. (I'm guessing this is what you meant)
I like to write books for children.
I have two books written thus far, they are fairy tales.
Many children are reading my books.
I like fitness, travel and music.
I like traveling because I want to learn English for dialogue. ('for dialogue' should be replaced with 'so I can communicate with others.)
hope this helps I am guessing what you meant though so take it with a grain of salt.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is Svetlana.
I live in the capital of the Republic of Tatarstan - Kazan.
Kazan is very, very big city.
I am the head of the HR department at my company.
I like writing books for children.
I have 2 books -- they have been fairy successful.
Many children reading my books.
I like fitness, travelling and music.
I like travelling, therefore I want to learn English to improve my speaking.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name Svetlana.
I live in capital Repablic Republic of Tatarstan - Kazan.
Kazan is very-very big tawn town.
Ia am shef H. R Chief department .
I like TO write (like writing) bookS for children.
I have 2 books - fairy tall tales*.
Many children reading have read my books.
I like fitness, travelling, musik music*.
I like travelling , bekous because (cos/ cuz) i want TO learn English for dialog communication.
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