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No corrections needed. However, thank you for this entry Jeff. Personally, I see you're a creative individual who expresses yourself well! What admiration you must have for being innovative :) For instance with your hair length, this is how you express yourself with and I believe in that fully. You should be yourself in this world no matter the costs of any disadvantages that may occur, as you discussed with what other's thought.
You can love yourself, but me too because we need more people like you for this world! Continue to live your life, I agree with you and keep on standing up for yourself. Actually, I'm curious of why this photo looks like it was taken in the 80's? :) The glasses, car, photography is relative to that of the 80's. No matter though. Expression is good at all times.
Most of this is in perfect English - in fact, it's better than most of the people going to my school! However, there's a couple of teeny mistakes :(
- "Well, I really did not want to change my photo but one of them, a new friend, innocently asked why I did not show my entire face. Perhaps it is because I am ashamed of myself or my corrections? (here, you could either lose the question mark or change it to "Is it perhaps because I am ashamed of myself or my corrections?" )
- "Not only this, but he also remarked that he would like to see the face of his corrector."
And I'm sorry to hear that you have been the victim of idiots :( Your picture is very awesome by the way! You kind of remind me of John Lennon a little, which is by all means a compliment! ^_^
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