Corrections · 5
My Sunday
Today I had one morning class which was on English and the temperature here was 34 c which was very hot so I didn't want to go out anywhere else so I spent all of my day sitting in a coffee shop and read a book for my coming examination which is next on Saturday. Even I was alone but I still couldn't concentrate with my reading. What should I do?
firstly, avoid writing sentences like ¨Today I had one morning class which was on English and the temperature here was 34 c which was very hot so I didn't want to go out anywhere else so I spent all of my day sitting in a coffee shop and read a book for my coming examination which is next on Saturday.¨. Shorter sentences convey the message well. always follow the KISS principal, Keep It Short & Simple.
2ndly. coffee shop is hardly a place I would go to concentrate on studies. Try own room where solitude helps you to concentrate.
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