Who can help me to correct these doubts?
I would like somebody correct me this excerpt:
Those books was pretty hidden but whereas the clerk was looking for by an aisle I wonder myself if I could convey my complain to the appropriate department.
In Spanish I want to say "Aquellos libros estaban bastantes escondidos, pero mientras que el dependiente miraba por un pasillo yo me preguntaba si podría transmitir mi queja al departamento correspondiente"
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This is how I would say it:
Those books were pretty well hidden, but while the clerk was searching the aisle I found myself wondering if I should file a complaint with his(/her) department.
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Those books was were pretty hidden but whereas while the clerk was looking for by an through an aisle I wondered to myself if I could convey my complaint to the appropriate department.
As a side note, instead of "convey my complaint" I would just say "complain"
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