My first lesson to you is to learn the capitalization rules of English!  If you don't know see

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm

If you don't understand, ask. :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi, i'm irina,21, i am from medellin, colombia. i'm learning English because i want to talk other language beside Spanish and also because i love it

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi, I'm Irina,21, I am from medellin, colombia. I'm learning English because I want to talk speak other another language besides Spanish and also because I love it.

Buen trabajo!
He capitalizado la palabra "yo" en ingles. Tambien, he usado la palabra "speak" en lugar de "talk" y "another" en lugar de "other".