안녕하세요, Ella씨! ^^

우리 어머니는 호주에 계세요. 언제 호주에 갈거예요?

Ella씨는 만약 한국어를 가르치면, 저는 영어를 가르칠 수 있어요. ^^

LEGEND:

X - Correction

O - Suggestion

I wnat want to~ 

I really want to make a new friend.

I studied English very hard. (공보하고 있어요 or 공부했어요? If 공부했어요, then correct. If 공보하고 있어요, I am studying English very hard)

Because I'm going to working holiday to Austalia. Because I'm going to Australia during a working holiday OR Because I'm going to have a working holiday in Australia

I need to teach me friend of English. I need a friend to teach me English

I have many times.I can talk when you want to learn Korean. 시간 많이 있어요? I have a lot of free time. I am available to talk with if you want to learn Korean.

I want to your E-mail or latter.^^ Send me your e-mails or letters.

감사합니다!

어머니는 브리즈번에 계세요. ^^ Have fun in Australia! ^^

i'm going to go Perth. ==> I'm going to go to Perth -OR- I'm going to Perth

maybe,,, i will go on August. ==> I will probably go in August

i can teach you Korean. i think,,, you speak Korean very well. ==> 아니요, 제 한국어를 할 수 있은데 잘 못 해요.

do you want me to teach you? it's my pleasure ==> 네, 감사합니다! And I can help you with your English. ^^

I want to~

I really want to make a new friend.
I studied English very hardly, because I'm going to work to Australia on holiday .
I need a friend to teach me English.
I have plenty of free time. I can talk if you want to learn Korean.
I want your E-mail or letter.^^

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Hi Ella Kim,

I'm not interested in learning Korean at this period of time because I don't have any, but if you need help with your English I'll be happy to help you. Feel free to contact me  :)