Corrections · 12
Animals And Faith
Who says that animals do not have faith?
Look at this otter. It was standing upright, putting its palms together devoutly as if praying and then whispering: “God, please let me have a fish!”
The British photographer who took this picture said that he had waited for two hours in the unusually cold winter to capture this photo. He has been a photographer for twenty years, but it was the first time for him to come across such a situation.
An excellent job, Kary! Other than "He has been being a photographer..." and the last sentence being the dreaded "comma splice," nothing else was technically wrong. Whatever "word" changes I made I did because the definition of the words I used above were a better fit. (And yes, I'm still working on that photo! I can't decide between a bear, like yours, a pig, or a panda! LOL!)
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