First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Demi Li. I live in Shanghai China. I want to improve my English level for my job. My hometown is in Inner Mongolia. I like to watching American TV play, for example 'Prison Break', 'Lost' etc.I am a Mandarin Chinese native speaker. I have got a Bachelor of Economics in college of North China. Welcome some English native speakers can to contact me. We can exchange language skill help each other.

The fundamentals are very solid, just remember to space your words after a period pay attention to your style of speech. The green China just means that it is unnecessary, Shanghai (one word) is a very famous city, so everyone knows that is in China. Over all very good