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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am from China, live in Shanghai now, I want to improve my oral english, I can help you in Chinese. I use English in my work, such as mail, report and some document, but I am shy to speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, USA or other countrys will visit our office sometimes, I want to communicate with them fluent.
Maybe you could say it something like: I am from China and now live in Shanghai. I want to improve my oral English. I can help you in Chinese. I use English in my work (such as with mail, reports, and some documents), but I am shy to speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, USA or other countries will visit our office sometimes. I want to communicate with them more fluently.
You can see that I just changed it a little bit. It is very important to put a period (the dot) at the end of a sentence. Sometimes it's a little hard to tell where to end a sentence, isn't it? Countries is spelled with the plural having ies at the end, not countrys.
I am shy to WHEN speakING. (My mistake.)
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am from China, AND I NOW live in Shanghai now, I want to improve my oral eEnglish SPEAKING SKILLS. I can help you in WITH Chinese. I use English in my AT work, such as TO SEND EmailS, CREATE reportS and TO WRITE some documentS. , but I am shy to WHEN speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, THE USA, or other countrysIES will visit our office sometimes, AND I want to communicate with them fluent.
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