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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am from China, live in Shanghai now, I want to improve my oral english, I can help you in Chinese. I use English in my work, such as mail, report and some document, but I am shy to speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, USA or other countrys will visit our office sometimes, I want to communicate with them fluent.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am from China, live in Shanghai now, I want to improve my oral english, I can help you in Chinese. I use English in my work, such as mail, report and some document, but I am shy to speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, USA or other countrys will visit our office sometimes, I want to communicate with them fluent.

 

Maybe you could say it something like:  I am from China and now live in Shanghai.  I want to improve my oral English.  I can help you in Chinese.  I use English in my work (such as with mail, reports, and some documents), but I am shy to speak.  Our colleagues who come from Germany, USA or other countries will visit our office sometimes.  I want to communicate with them more fluently.

 

You can see that I just changed it a little bit.  It is very important to put a period (the dot) at the end of a sentence.  Sometimes it's a little hard to tell where to end a sentence, isn't it?  Countries is spelled with the plural having ies at the end, not countrys.

 

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I am shy to WHEN speakING. (My mistake.)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am from China, AND I NOW live in Shanghai now, I want to improve my oral eEnglish SPEAKING SKILLS. I can help you in WITH Chinese. I use English in my AT work, such as TO SEND EmailS, CREATE reportS and TO WRITE some documentS. , but I am shy to WHEN speak. Our colleagues who come from Germany, THE USA, or other countrysIES will visit our office sometimes, AND I want to communicate with them fluent.

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