First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello!
My name is Oksana! I'm 23 old. I'm student and worker. I live in Russia, in Nizhniy Tagil city. My favorite animal is my cat. She's name is Huuusaaaa. I like play board-game, singing, dancing, meet with my friends, partying, Fitness and etc.
And I know English very bad! I hope learn English with you!
Thank you for attention! Salutations, me)
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello!
My name is Oksana! I'm 23 years old. I'm student and worker. I live in Russia, in the city of Nizhniy Tagil city. My favorite animal is my cat. She's Her name is Huuusaaaa. I like play board-games, singing, dancing, meet hanging out with my friends, partying, fitness and etc.
And I know my English is very bad! I hope I can learn English with you!
Thank you for your attention! Salutations Greetings, me)
Привет Оксана! Your English is not bad at all, and I'm sure you will learn quickly ;)
I'm trying to learn Russian... and of course I'll help you with your English studies if you like.
Greetings, Adam.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello!
My name is Oksana! I'm 23 years old. I'm a student and a worker. I live in Russia, in the city of Nizhniy Tagil city. My favorite animal is my cat. She's Her name is Huuusaaaa. I like playing board-games, singing, dancing, meet hanging out with my friends, partying, fitness, and etc.
And I know my English is very bad! I hope I can learn English with you!
Thank you for attention! Salutations,Farewell me)
I tried limiting how many corrections I made. I have two notes for you. First, you should never start a sentence with the word 'and', as this word is used for continuing a sentence. Second, the word 'salutations', is a greeting (much like hello). Great job overall!
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)))Oh, U watched "Adventures of Shurik"! I like this film very much. Thank you for comment.
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Hello Abracadabra - I hope you magically find a way to improve your English. Although to be honest, it is probably not as bad as you think. Maybe you can start by practicing on your cat ? Good luck :)))
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Hi! I'm sure that you' ll improve your English here. If you need any help, I'd love to help you :)
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