First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am from Chongqing, China. Throught I am an English major, I am not good at it.  , I have thought would like to go to American after graduating.  I gratuated. So, on one hand, Hopefully, from this webside, I can practise my oral English, on the other hand,I can make some American friends.   Maybe we will meet in the future.
Hope to be your friend. ~

很抱歉要說你的英文非常差.定要注意你的 spelling!你讀了幾多年英文?如果寫得不好,英文怎样可以說得好呢?寫多些簡單英語作文,我們才可以幫助你的英文進步

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am from Chongqing, China. Though I am an English major, I am not good at it. I have thought to go to America after I graduate. So on one hand, on this website I can practice my oral English. On the other hand, I can make some American friends. Maybe we will meet in the future.
Hope to be your friend~

Use the period to end sentences, use the comma to separate clauses within a sentence. Put a space after either.