I commend your effort in expanding your vocabulary and a herculean effort to weave them into an essay.  For this you get an A+.  However the usage in some of them are not what we would use.  Also you need to pay attention with our grammar, tenses and capitalization rules.  If I were to correct your main essay, the result would be totally different and not written by you.

Words I learnt Today All words in a title should be capitalized.

I learnt the following words: garrulous, broom, titter, pest, immora,l manual, procedure, gale, engorge, parade, indifference, abrupt, interpersonal, strengthen, interfere and kinship.

Here is a manual of interpersonal relationship,it will tell you how to strengthen the relationship you have like kinship,friendship.Maybe there are some people who titters behind you when you are in a trouble,or she is garrulous that always judges your dressing,or he not only thinks you are abrupt when you have a naked parade in a gale for the anti-globle warming but also gives you an indifference,or he thinks you are rather rude if you engorge in public,and you may think some people are immoral pests at the same way.But interpersonal relationship is not simple as a procedure of computer.Have a self-examination first:did you say "thank you" when people gives you a broom which you need,did you intefere other's life?