First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,I link the web just to try.I'm a Chinese girl named leya and I came to US, I will write some essays,if you like to revise the article for me, it's very sweet fo you. At least I thought my English is not too poor to undertand :>
*to the seriousGOAL to study English, I will make a introduction about how you can help about my article, first I know cuz of our own countries there must be some special choices of words when we write,for me,it will be Chinese English absolutely.So I want it to be everyday English! Also,please correct my grammar mistakes. If you can understand what I write,just make it more pure and natural. (the changes will be amuzing!)And because our different culture and my middle level English I always can't find the best suitable words to express the meaning in English.
I always like beatiful articles with good atmosphere,if you are high-level enough you could also make me some changes,like more vivid and plump.
Thank you!have fun!*
the thing I introduce for myself is also for you, I'm a person who can write variety and typical Chinese from I'm a student at school and I read plenty of books so I'm confident to help who is interested in Chinese.
If we are from different countries but we can make a friendly communication just before we wants to learn a new language,it that good enough?
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,I link the web just to try.I'm a Chinese girl named leya and I came to US, I will write some essays,if you like to revise the article for me, it's very sweet fo you. At least I thought my English is not too poor to undertand :>*to the seriousGOAL to study English, I will make a introduction about how you can help about my article, first I know cuz of our own countries there must be some special choices of words when we write,for me,it will be Chinese English absolutely.So I want it to be everyday English! Also,please correct my grammar mistakes. If you can understand what I write,just make it more pure and natural. (the changes will be amuzing!)And because our different culture and my middle level English I always can't find the best suitable words to express the meaning in English.
I always like beatiful articles with good atmosphere,if you are high-level enough you could also make me some changes,like more vivid and plump.
Thank you!have fun!*
the thing I introduce for myself is also for you, I'm a person who can write variety and typical Chinese from I'm a student at school and I read plenty of books so I'm confident to help who is interested in Chinese.
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i dont know english very much but i think you want say "I know" in the last sentence. :)
you speak very well, in my knowledges i dont see any critical error in your grammar :)
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does anyone here?who can help me and see my article.I don't think my article is good enough that no changes! haha
thanks,show your kindness! :>
thanks,show your kindness! :>
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,I link the web just to try.I'm a Chinese girl named leya and I came to US, I will write some essays,if you like to revise the article for me, it's very sweet of you. At least I thought my English is not too poor to undertand :>*to the seriousGOAL to study English, I will make a introduction about how you can help me about my article, first I know cuz of our own countries there must be some special choices of words when we write,for me,it will be Chinese English absolutely.So I want it to be everyday English! Also,please correct my grammar mistakes. If you can understand what I write,just make it more pure and natural. (the changes will be amuzing!)And because our different culture and my middle level English I always can't find the best suitable words to express the meaning in English.
I always like beatiful articles with good atmosphere,if you are high-level enough you could also make me some changes,like more vivid and plump.
Thank you!have fun!*
the thing I introduce for myself is also for you, I'm a person who can write variety and typical Chinese from I'm a student at school and I read plenty of books so I'm confident to help who is interested in Chinese.
If we are from different countries but we can make a friendly communication just before we wants to learn a new language,it that good enough?
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