Still Enjoying It

My school was is a residential boarding school.  Hence, so we have to lived in the school dormintories everynight. The bed in the dormitory was is a bit strange for it was is placed in the mid-air, 2.5 metres high from the floor.
One of our classmates was watching a football match one night. He was shouting loundly, "Quick! Quick! Pass the ball! Oh!" Suddenly, because of Due to his excitement, he suddenly fell off the bed which was 2.5 metres high in the mid-air and hit the floor hardly.

When As his roommates were going to called the doctor, when he suddenly shouted burst out happily, "Good Great goal!"

Still Enjoy It

My school was a residential school, so we I lived in at the school everynight. The bed in the dormitory was a bit strange for it was placed in the mid-air, 2.5 metres high from the floor.
One of our classmates was watching a football match one night. He was shouting loundly,' Quick! Quick! Pass the ball! Oh!' Suddenly, because of his excitement, he fell of the bed which was 2.5 metres high in the mid-air and hit the floor hardly hard.
When his roommates were going to called the doctor, he suddenly shouted happily, 'Good goal!'

This was really good. When talking about a place you do something at you use at. In this case it was live. You were talking about yourself in the beginning so you use I.