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Terrible day I never imagined that i would go through like today. It was rainning heavy ，so many cars broke and stopped. A terrible traffic Jam i have never seen before.Unfortunately, our company 's car broke as well.The backup car couldn't go through the traffic jam to pick us up. we had no choice but walked home by ourself . Many people walked in the road, i saw they were waiting for cars to get home. More, seeper was higher more than i can handle. The shoes and skirt were wet . I cann't see what touch my legs anyway. i am scared that snake would behind in the seeper. Everything was mess. I was thinking how i can get home in that case.I keep walking with my colleague. Finally I took four hours to get home. The first time i felt strongly miss home. LOL. But i think experienced is a good thing now.

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Terrible day

I never imagined that i would go through a day like today. It was raining heavily and so many cars broke and stopped. There was a terrible traffic jam that I had never seen before. Unfortunately, our company's car broke as well. The backup car couldn't go through the traffic jam to pick us up. We had no choice but to walk home by ourselves . Many people walked in the road because they were waiting for cars to get home.
The sewer was higher than I could handle. My shoes and skirt were wet . I couldn't see what touched my legs.  I was scared that snake would sneak up behind the sewer. Everything was a mess. I was thinking about how to get home. I kept walking with my colleagues. It took four hours to get home. This was the first time I felt homesick. LOL. But I think it was a good experience.
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Terrible day

I never imagined that i would go through like today. It was rainning heavy, so many cars broke (down) and stopped. A terrible traffic Jam (like) i have never seen before.Unfortunately, our company's car broke as well. The backup car couldn't go through the traffic jam to pick us up (so) we had no choice but  to walked home by ourselves. Many people walked on the road (and) i saw they were waiting for cars to get home.

More( While "More," is not incorrect, "As well," is better than "more" at the  start of a sentence, "Moreover" would be even better, but it is not used very much anymore), seeper  the flood water was higher more than i can could handle. The My shoes and skirt were wet, I cann't see what touches my legs anyway. i am scared that snake would behind be in the seeper flood water. Everything was a mess, I was thinking how i can get home in that case. I kept walking with my colleague, finally I took four hours to get home. The first time i felt ("strongly miss" or "glad to get") home. LOL. But I think what I experienced is a good thing now.


I've never been in a flood, so I cant imagine what this must be like ... Thanks for sharing this story with me.
Andrew.

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ouch ! that is terrible :)

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