an exhausted day An Exhausting Day

Today I got up at 7 o'clock. It was quite early for me. It was raining and cold in the morning. I had After having breakfast with my parents. After eating breakfast, I cleaned the house and washed the clothes. At noon, I cooked lunch for my grandmother. She is had been ill for a while and so family members , therefore, our families take care of her by turns to care for her. Today I spent all day with her taking care of her daily needs life. It isn't an easy job for taking a patient. Not an easy job!  I hope that my grandmother will get better soon and everyone will be happier.  can get well soon and feel happier.

真是婆婆的福有你這個孝順孫女!

Correct this entry?  OK!  You are mixing participles; the day is exhausting, you are exhausted.  The "ing" participle is always active!  The "ed" participle is always passive.  You used the simple and not the perfect verb for a perfect situation.  Why do we call it a perfect?  Was it named for a particular Professor?  Ha ha!  Because it started perfectly in the past and progressed perfectly.  You made another mistake with a verb, can you find it?  It's a good entry but a sad story; we hope your grandmother has good health.