It's It is Cold Today    You need to capitalize every word in a title.  However, you may leave out the minor words.

I'm I am in the northern part of China.  The weather is very cold.  Although it is sunny today, but the temperature is -1 - -9c. ranges from minus one to nine degrees Celsius.  Now It is the coldest days time of on the year.  It snowed the day before yesterday.  ,It lookeds very pretty outside. Fortunately, there are is heating in the rooms.  My  Usually,my bedroom is over 20C the temperature is more than 20c in my bedroom. I like warm prefer heat more than the cold.  ,I want to spend my winter in the south. I like Gulangyu 1 Island.  I hope I can go there again. I recall the crabs on the beach, and the palm trees all along the shore.  I can't never foget the Gala Inn that Ihave ever lived,i like their ornament had stayed. I simply adore their decor.

I think i will spend winter in the south when i was an old lady:) Yes,i'm willing to go there in the winter.I'd love to go there:) When I am old, I would like to spend all my winters in the south.  I love the warmth too much not to go.

1. 嶼 means island.  So this is repetitive. 

It's Cold Today

I'm in the north of China, where the weather is very cold. Although it is sunny today,but the temperature is  minus 1 to  minus 9 C. Now is are the coldest days in of the year. It snowed the day before yesterday, and it looks very pretty outside. Fortunately, there are is heating in the rooms usually, so the temperature is more than 20 C in my bedroom.
I like warm more than cold. I want to spend my winter in the south. I like Gulangyu Island. I hope I can go there again. I recall the crabs on the beach, and the palm trees all along the shore. I can't forget the Gala Inn, where I have ever lived once stayed. I like their ornament decor.
I think I will spend winter in the south when I was am an old lady.:) Yes, I'm willing to go there in the winter. I'd love to go there.:)