First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! My name is YiYi.I'm a 16-year-old girl (and I come) from China.I like English and my dream is to rely on my own ability to go abroad. I want to make friends (with you) and learn English (from you). I sincerely hope you can help me.Thank you very much!

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Words in red are misspelled or forgotten.

Your English is very good, YiYi, don't worry about it, just keep on writing notebooks and practice it with your language partners. 

Good luck, 

Zad Pia