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Dreams
Our dreams - it's a part of us.
Our dreams are a part of us.
Nobody could take away our breeze and our dreams.
Just like how nobody can take away a breeze, nobody can take away your dreams.
As many people, as many dreams.
There are as many dreams as there are people.
Yesterday I saw a place about what people can or can't do in their lives.
Yesterday, I saw [? a film??] about what people can or can't do in their lives.
We need love and to be in a good mood much more than money or gold.
Love can make us happy. Money can not.
When you tired, came home late after long day you need someone who just can understand you.
When you are tired and come home late after a long day, you need someone who can understand you.
I have a lot of dreams. I dream about all things once I will do.
I have a lot of dreams. I dream about all the things I will do.
I will see beautiful places on the Earth, fly by plane, discover unknown civilization.
I will see the most beautiful places on Earth. I will travel on planes, and discover unknown civilizations.
And what are you dreaming about?
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Also -- on your profile --
I know Russian and Ukrainian, speak English, and started to learn Spanish. Each language may us to be international creatures!=)
I know Russian and Ukrainian. I speak English and I'm starting to learn Spanish. Each language we know will help us become more international! (cosmopolitan or multicultural)
Dreams
Our dreams - it's they are a part of us. Nobody could can take them from us.away our breeze and our dreams. There are many dreams as there are many people, as many dreams. Yesterday I saw a place about what where people can or can't cannot do in their lives. We need to love and to be in a good mood happy than just having much more than money in bank accounts. or gold. When you are tired from work, it is more important to have someone you love to welcome you home. came home late after long day you need someone who just can understand you. I have a lot of many dreams. Once I have a dream, I shall set goals to realize it. about all things once I will do. I will see beautiful places on the on this earth. Fly by in a plane, to discover places that are unknown to me. civilization.
And What are you dreaming about?
I am not sure if you wanted to become an anthropologist or just a tourist explorer.
Correct this entry? OK! You are doing well using the articles but "day" takes one. Some ackward construction with adjective clauses but it's a great entry in general. It tells a compelling story. I wondered about some words that you chose, "breeze" for example. I wasn't sure about that one. I enjoyed reading it and you made me understand something and you used English to do it. I think that's great! Continue your good progress with the language.
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