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Can Anyone Translate It into English? Thanks!
你见,或者不见我 You see me or you see me not.
我就在那里 Hey! I am over there.
不悲不喜 Neither in sorrow nor in joy.
你念,或者不念我 You think of me or maybe not,
情就在那里 Hey! Affection is over there.
不来不去 Neither coming nor going.
你爱,或者不爱我 Love me or love me not.
爱就在那里 Hey! Love is over there.
不增不减 Neither increasing nor decreasing.
你跟,或者不跟我 You follow or follow me not.
我的手就在你手里 My hand is in your hand.
不舍不弃 No yearning, no leaving.
来我的怀里 Just enter into my embrace.
或者 Perhaps,
让我住进你的心里 Let me into the depths of your heart.
默然 相爱 Silence, but of mutual love. Hush, let us be in love,
寂静 欢喜 In quietude, be in joy.
As with the discussion with Linda, another version with darker tones by changing a few non-keywords and the choice of words used. This is for comparison and to show that translation is tricky business and largely dependent on the mood and imagery conjured by the poem to the translator/reader. This one is more one sided. To have him/her, regardless of everthing. The person's real love is somewhere else for another body!
你见,或者不见我 You see me or you see me not!
我就在那里 Alas! I am over there.
不悲不喜 No sorrow, no joy.
你念,或者不念我 You think of me or perhaps not!
情就在那里 Alas! Affection is over there.
不来不去 Don't come, don't go.
你爱,或者不爱我 Love me or perhaps love me not!
爱就在那里 Alas! Love is over there.
不增不减 Your affection is the same, nothing more, nothing less.
你跟,或者不跟我 You follow or perhaps you follow me not!
我的手就在你手里 My hand will be in your hand.
不舍不弃 I shall never let it go.
来我的怀里 In my embrace, you will come.
或者 Perhaps,
让我住进你的心里 Allow me into the depths of your heart.
默然 相爱 Love in silence,
寂静 欢喜 Still a delight in this quietude.
It doesn’t matter whether you see me or not
Never sad or glad
It doesn’t matter whether you miss me or not
The affection is right there
And it is not going anywhere
It doesn’t matter whether you love me or not
The love is right there
Never to be more or less
It doesn’t matter whether you are with me or not
My hand is just in yours
And I am not going to let it go
Come to embrace me
I live in your heart eternally
In silence, I feel your love
In Calmness, I feel your joy.
Can Anyone Translate It into English? Thanks!
你见,或者不见我 To see me or not,
我就在那里 I am just there,
不悲不喜 No sorrows, no joys.
你念,或者不念我 To miss me or not,
情就在那里 Affection is just there,
不来不去 Never comes , never leaves.
你爱,或者不爱我 To love me or not,
爱就在那里 Love is just there,
不增不减 Never increase , never decrease.
你跟,或者不跟我 To gether with me or not,
我的手就在你手里 my hands is just in yours,
不舍不弃 Never abandon, never drop.
来我的怀里 Then step into my embrace
或者 Or
让我住进你的心里 Allow me to reach the bottom of your heart.
默然 相爱 Without words , we be in love;
寂静 欢喜 In slience, we be in joy.
Can Anyone Translate It into English? Thanks!
你见,或者不见我
我就在那里
不悲不喜
你念,或者不念我
情就在那里
不来不去
你爱,或者不爱我
爱就在那里
不增不减
你跟,或者不跟我
我的手就在你手里
不舍不弃
来我的怀里
或者
让我住进你的心里
默然 相爱
寂静 欢喜
See me or see me not
I’m right there
Neither sorrow nor joy
Miss me or miss me not
Love is right there
Neither coming nor leaving
Love me or love me not
Love is right there
Neither increase nor lessen
Follow me or follow me not
My hand is right in your hands
Never let go
Come to my arms
Or
Let me live into your heart
Love in silent
Delight in quiet
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